Wednesday, January 14, 2009

titanic poem?? hahaa

violins swell 
beautiful music.
my story forever they'll tell. 

the ship rocks, the people shout no, 
i hold on for dear life. 
i just want to let go. 

the mast tips
my fingers slip 
i can't do it anymore. 

the ocean glistens
a great and terrible beauty. 
its their fault. they just didn't listen. 

the waves are inching closer
and i start to think it over
did i make the right choice? 

it feels like forever.
a few seconds more. 
a smile across my lips 
this is what i've waited for. 


1 comment:

maggs said...

amazingg :) great and tragic.

Especially the last line. Great rhyme and amazing ending, it really captures it :DDD