i wrote this in doctrine!! haha. i dont know how i feel about it. i like it, but im not crazy about it. and im not in a bad mood at all it just sounds like it. hahha. k here it is::
beautiful eyes
violet skies
secrets and lies within them.
she just wants to know
that you won't let her go
doesn't matter. they always do.
and her fluttery lashes hide her fear
blinking them quickly to keep in the tear
they can't. they always come.
the iris is bloodshot, the pain is so real
she needs no words to show how she feels
they do the talking, every time.
i truly believe that you can tell almost everything about a person by looking at their eyes. so that's where i drew inspiration from. you dont know how many times i've seen one of my friends who insists they are fine, and their eyes are just screaming, help. my heart is breaking.
so i definitely try to help people who are like that because you have to be in pain for your eyes to say it like that!!!
today was a pretty good day. nothing really big happened. boringggness. hahaha.
but i definitely prefer that over drama!! yes indeed!!
i just hope it will get a little more exciting in certain ways :P
lovee anja.
2 comments:
wow i love it :)
u always have such cool ideas for poems, and thats so true, eyes really do speak so much about someone! and yess today there wasnt any drama, but tht was defenitelyy a goood thing! :DD
heres my edits.
Beautiful eyes
As blue as the skies
But the pain lies behind
She just wants to know
That you won't let her go
But it doesn’t matter anymore,
You always do.
And her long lashes hide her fears
Blinking them so quickly
To keep away her tears
But she can’t anymore, so they come.
Her iris is bloodshot,
The pain is so real
She needs no words
To let you know how she feels
Because those beautiful eyes
they do the talking
Every time.
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